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Emo girl

Just another emo girl,
All alone in this world
Made by feelings you can't understand
Living in the darkness that is my friend

Black my eyes
And slith my wrists
Fed up with lies
I'm sorry I exist

So rip my heart
Go tear it apart,
It's already numb,hidden so deep
Locked in feelings,fallen asleep

Oh,and I'm so emo I could cry
Listening to songs about death
To this world I'd say goodbye
My paper heart will slowly die..

And I'm dieing inside,
My heart torn to shreads
In my lonelyness I hide
Oh,this nightmare never ends

I've been stabbed in the heart
From the front,from the back
I'm tired of fake loves and friends
That ripped me apart

Just another emo girl
I play the guitar and write suicide notes
There's always a reason to feel not good enough
I don't understand why life is so tough

Just another emo girl
My hair a mess,my eyes so dark
Void of feelings,void of spark

Sometimes I wish I'd be,..
As invisible as you make me feel
And if it were for me
All my wounds would heal.

All my tears fall from the sky
Please don't make me cry
Am I that unimportant to you?
There's no one to care,It must be true.

I'm just another emo girl
Passing through this superficial world
Locked in feelings of depression...
Just with hope as her possesion

I'm just another emo girl
As unperfect as can be
Just another life in this world
My emo self and me..
Ok so this poem is not for the happy-go-lucky ppl who can't stand sad stuff..Oky maybe I exaggerated a bit with the sadness but anyway I wanted to write sumthin emo :) so this is it...I know some of ya feel or have felt at least some of the stuff in this poem..enjoy...I hope :D...
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Ashlay0The0Emo0Girl Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New member
I thought that waz pretty great keep it up u might get famous with stuf like that 😌
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HardcoreDeadPrincess Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Great job, this was very well written ^.^
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lokihiddlestonlover Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sad thing is, this sounds so much like me..........
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YoItsFangHere Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
wow. ur really good at writing. im Fang. wuts up?
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destiny98 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
wow... i play guitar AND write poetry but not suicide notes... ^^ i liked it.. i write my poems probably the same as you it reminded me of myself in some parts... :) good job! [:
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Sporks-And-Knives Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's so true...I wish I could tell the truth and rhyme at the same time like you...
:(
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gothagotsit10 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I ...... Like it ...... Kind of like my life.... Any ways this is a good poem :)
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krayonz9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2010
i luv it
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munchi813 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2010
you just described me o_____o ....... except i suck at guitar :s
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