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Emo girl

Just another emo girl,
All alone in this world
Made by feelings you can't understand
Living in the darkness that is my friend

Black my eyes
And slith my wrists
Fed up with lies
I'm sorry I exist

So rip my heart
Go tear it apart,
It's already numb,hidden so deep
Locked in feelings,fallen asleep

Oh,and I'm so emo I could cry
Listening to songs about death
To this world I'd say goodbye
My paper heart will slowly die..

And I'm dieing inside,
My heart torn to shreads
In my lonelyness I hide
Oh,this nightmare never ends

I've been stabbed in the heart
From the front,from the back
I'm tired of fake loves and friends
That ripped me apart

Just another emo girl
I play the guitar and write suicide notes
There's always a reason to feel not good enough
I don't understand why life is so tough

Just another emo girl
My hair a mess,my eyes so dark
Void of feelings,void of spark

Sometimes I wish I'd be,..
As invisible as you make me feel
And if it were for me
All my wounds would heal.

All my tears fall from the sky
Please don't make me cry
Am I that unimportant to you?
There's no one to care,It must be true.

I'm just another emo girl
Passing through this superficial world
Locked in feelings of depression...
Just with hope as her possesion

I'm just another emo girl
As unperfect as can be
Just another life in this world
My emo self and me..
Ok so this poem is not for the happy-go-lucky ppl who can't stand sad stuff..Oky maybe I exaggerated a bit with the sadness but anyway I wanted to write sumthin emo :) so this is it...I know some of ya feel or have felt at least some of the stuff in this poem..enjoy...I hope :D...
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Ashlay0The0Emo0Girl Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
I thought that waz pretty great keep it up u might get famous with stuf like that 😌
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HardcoreDeadPrincess Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Great job, this was very well written ^.^
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lokihiddlestonlover Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sad thing is, this sounds so much like me..........
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YoItsFangHere Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
wow. ur really good at writing. im Fang. wuts up?
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destiny98 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
wow... i play guitar AND write poetry but not suicide notes... ^^ i liked it.. i write my poems probably the same as you it reminded me of myself in some parts... :) good job! [:
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Sporks-And-Knives Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's so true...I wish I could tell the truth and rhyme at the same time like you...
:(
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gothagotsit10 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I ...... Like it ...... Kind of like my life.... Any ways this is a good poem :)
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krayonz9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2010
i luv it
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munchi813 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2010
you just described me o_____o ....... except i suck at guitar :s
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strongtomboi Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010
Thanks for speaking for us. This poem is everything my heart has been through. Ive tried so hard to express my self in my poems and now I've found yours. And with that said, I thank you =3
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1994EmoGirl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
i really like this poem
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1994EmoGirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
i like this poem is just like my life
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izzymabizzy Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2010
love the poem very deep and total describes how i feel..wow i am amazed it is wonderful :)love it <3
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FlAcAsIsTeR Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009
im kinda emo, and this just explains everything of how i feel, nice job i rly like it
:+fav: for sure
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Pandasgowoofwoof Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
This is exactly how I feel atm. Thanks for writing it!
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ponzi4life Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009   Writer
thats kinnda how i feel except less dramatic ;]
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tigergirl4kish78 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2008
thanks to one of my friends i'm now in a really emo mood. :(
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shatterd-soul-13 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:invisible: i felt it all most of the time :invisible:
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Schaduwmeisje Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2007
I love it...:heart:
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Ila-Sweet Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2007
wow. that is very good.
&& its sad to say....there are accully plp
that feel that way.
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Kim-1 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2007
Thank you..well usually I express all of my feelings that I have at the moment through poetry...so at the time I was really sad and kinda' depressed..I'm better now ...just that I don't know how long it will last..
it's not that things got really better for me..just that I found a bit of strenght to deal with them :)
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Ila-Sweet Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2007
wow... thats really cool.
:]
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Kim-1 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2007
:) thank you :hug:
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Ila-Sweet Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2007
any time!!
:hug::hug::heart:
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Locopunkster Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2006
It's really reall good! The choice of word is AWESOME! Th only critique I have is your gramatical composition. You need to work on spelling mistakes, spaces, apostrophes, and where you put your periods. But yeah, your message comes across anyways, it's just to make it look more... proffesional? Lol. It's good though, good job!
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Kim-1 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2006
thx :D..the choice of words?I think I'm running out of thoes lol..:hug: thx a bunch anyways..it's good to know that ppl actually read my poems :)
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Locopunkster Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2006
Lol. >.<; Ofcourse! Good poetry deserves to be read.
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Kim-1 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2006
thx a bunch :hug: :giggle:
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psplayer06 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2006   Photographer
its a relaly good poem and awww :cuddle: lol one thing you should notice is that even tho its in the "open" category, your metre is inconsistant. in teh first bit its AbAb and the second bit is AAbb. i dont know if you noticed, but im jsut letting you know :) i think you did a relaly good job tho :) keep it up!
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Kim-1 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2006
thx :D..I'll keep writing cuz I have a lot of inspiration lately anyway :)
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psplayer06 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2006   Photographer
aw well im happy to see that you're expressing your feelings creatively, instead of hurting yourself :)
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Kim-1 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2006
yep well..it's better like this isn't it?:)
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psplayer06 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2006   Photographer
it is. its a lot better this way :)
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Kim-1 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2006
:hug: thx
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psplayer06 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2006   Photographer
you're welcome :) :cuddle:
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